Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Over the past decades, the optimal way to deal with hardship in course of life has never ceased to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although it is undeniable that there are many unfortunate circumstances and unfavorable situations, such as despair of job or miserable living conditions are inevitable facts of human life, the issue as to whether accepting them or challenging them for improvements remains controversial. In the following essay, justification for and against this issue will be discussed.
On the one hand, many may advocate that acceptance and endurance of difficulties in daily life are the best solution in some extent. Those who believe that decent education paves the way for success with high salary and job satisfaction in the future. Nevertheless, ages and financial burdens to the whole family are one of barriers which force them especially female breadwinners to keep staying their comfort zone. They are mostly afraid of starting from scratch and even many may accept to wrap up their talents in a napkin in certain cases. Therefore, creating changes or breakthrough in life not only doesn’t alleviate current pressure, but also struggling with financial distress.
On the other hand, the opponents may argue that fighting and overcoming obstacles in entire life act as catalyst for improvements of individual and society rather than compromising them. It is common that instead of enduring a work which has been gradually coming to standstill, trying to get out of disappointed job makes individuals refresh themselves, dedicate inborn merits in new working environment to create values for enterprises and communities as well as handling with their financial problems thanks to handsome income in new company. Moreover, those who dare to overcome their limits will be likely to have important repercussion in life and positively motivates community. For example, Nick Vujicic who was born without limbs. Against all odds, he has become well-known as a motivational speaker and author of inspirational best seller books. In fact, God doesn’t give him a miracle, but he is a miracle of God for somebody else's salvation.
In conclusion, accepting with undesirable situations such as disappointed job or lack of money or challenging with them has surely pros and cons. Nonetheless, I am personally in flavor with the second argument because nobody can live twice, so do live in the bold life and create miracle for yourself in this life !
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31060606061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01332518538 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618686868687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2131177488 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.4375 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132881667834 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389827408216 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507573579281 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790000644683 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0138677579352 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.