Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some may think that trying to improve or challenge the situations can possibly be better idea. Others oppose that there is no best way, rather than accept the bad situation that happened. This essay will analyze the perspectives of both accepting and improving the situations and suggest that it is a better way to keep such situations being the same way it happened because it will allow people to continue their lives faster.
Many people believe in their faiths always trying to better all the bad situations. “No try gives unsuccessful result,” says somewhere by someone. If the midterm examination resulted in a bad score, we would better give more hard work on the study. The result would probably be better for sure. Unfortunately, not every other thing that get better immediately like the mark on the test. In reality, there are more than just study, we do have work, love, and all others which can be imagined. Especially the love story, the more attempts people try when they are broken, the more painful each will get. When it comes to the final stage of breaking up, the soothing system would take it place longer than usual.
Some individuals oppose that they try to accept any situations that happened. So, their live will be less complicated in the way of modern society. When it comes to an acceptance of each cases, most of them believe that it would be easier to move on from the problem. To illustrate, getting broken could be counted as mind-breaking situation. Many of human being would like to try once more on this love series, however, it is easier to let it be and move on. Additionally, by giving it a try, that would cause more damage mentally and lead to longer time of heart recovery.
As this essay have mentioned some reasons, I strong suppose the idea of accepting the situations is better than try and improve such situations. Even though the later idea might end up in some good story, it still takes too much time at the end of every bad period. To accept something, this would jump across those parts and lead to more basic way to live a life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
Some may think that trying to improve or challenge the...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
... to improve or challenge the situations can possibly be better idea. Others oppose that ther...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
.... 'No try gives unsuccessful result,' says somewhere by someone. If the midt...
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Line 7, column 696, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'places'?
Suggestion: places
...g up, the soothing system would take it place longer than usual. Some individua...
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Line 15, column 113, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...accepting the situations is better than try and improve such situations. Even though th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72357723577 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46656537353 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531165311653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9702515135 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.15 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223912746466 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719772490445 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060758086574 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142923116896 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372626974372 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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