Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider the countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Throughout the centuries, nurturing kids has been recognized as a challenging task among several groups of parents. While some argue that such responsibility should only be performed in the cities, others advocate parenting is most effective in the countryside. Both views will be examined in this essay, and I will also explain why I feel it is important to raise a child in the rural areas rather than big cities.
Those who support growing up children in a suburb or in the countryside have two main arguments. First of all, these places tend to be boring, without any cultural events or entertainment options. Kids living in the New York City, for instance, have the chance to take uptown to the Metropolitan Museum of Art or see movies in a regular basis, in comparison with the rural areas, where the local cinemas screen films once or twice a week. Another argument is that living in the city is more affordable, while suburbs certainly have hidden costs. In terms of transportation, for example, families in large cities like Washington or Tokyo, use public transit systems, whereas suburban families are generally forced to drive cars for commuting and everyday activities.
Others, however, myself included, feel that the children’s’ upbringing works better when it takes place in the countryside. A key factor for parents that opt to keep their family in a rural environment, is spending time outdoors. Indeed, it is healthier to live in the countryside due to the sheer amount of walking outside, outdoor playgrounds and parks. If children had to be most of their time in a backyard, they would definitely end up with sad feelings or even depression.
In conclusion, although it would be full of activities and cheaper to grow up kids in the city, I feel that countryside has more beneficial effects on children’s health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02280130293 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9162682899 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644951140065 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7974088018 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.615384615 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170898535101 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542246420298 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425401569052 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993948524944 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246750537382 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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