some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school age children. others think that time is better spent on more academic sujects. discussboth views and give your opinion.
It is often argued by some people that all the school-going children should have physical activity classes in their daily routine in school, while some others opine that the time can be spent well in learning academics. The essay will further emphasize on both sides of the argument.
To begin with, there are many reasons for people who consider that student should focus on academics rather than on physical fitness. Firstly, these people think that outstanding performance academically would provide the child with good job opportunities. Moreover, they also feel that it would improve the students' understanding of the subject. For instance, a child found to spend more than half of his time would be ahead of his friends in class and would get settled in his life earlier than his classmates. Furthermore, some parents are also of the same opinion and would put pressure on their kids to study all the time.
On the contrary, some argue that children should be physically fit and it is possible only by attending classes on physical education. This is because of the impetus that they feel if the child is fit, he would eventually acquire success in all aspects of his life. Firstly, the child does not undergo any pressure due to his time spent equally on studies and sports. Moreover, this would improve his cognitive skills, which makes him understand all the things effectively and he also would be able to build communication skills. Furthermore, the child always stays healthy.
In my opinion, I feel studies without any other activity would make the students feel stressed and this would affect the child's future. All the schools should include physical exercise classes in the daily schedule of all the class students.
To conclude, most of the people feel that concentrating in academics would make the children succeed in life. However, I feel that the child will be successful only if he is exposed to some kind of physical activity in his early ages. I also consider that all schools should make physical sports classes mandatory in the daily schedule of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, i feel, kind of, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0229226361 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57342962694 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492836676218 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3245112962 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234665261772 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833302065983 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727930361546 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158582483982 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043698322676 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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