Some people believe that it is essential to include physical education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the recent era, the trend of decreasing time allocated for physical education is continuously increasing. While some people believe that most of the curriculum should include subject-based studies, my opinion is that physical education is essential for ensuring a healthier future for all students.
On the one hand, those who believe physical education should be reduced and the scrapped time is better to be allocated for more academic subjects might argue that the present era of competition is demanding more doctors, engineers, and scientists. According to them, only academic prowess might be able to help them to reach these hard-fought career paths. For example, in China, this practice of reducing health-related studies and physical education is already occurring and this method is somewhat working for their economy. In contrast, the unhealthy lifestyle there is increasing due to ignorance in this matter and competent minds are becoming weaker and less efficient.
On the other hand, in my opinion, physical education is imperative due to the fact that this field of education teaches us about leading a healthy lifestyle, dieting, exercising, and proper management of time. For example, the proponent researchers of this field in the USA suggested the schools in the states to include physical education from the start. According to them, a growing body requires proper care-taking and physical knowledge is necessary to achieve a proper this, which in turn, might help to gain a clear mindset.
In conclusion, despite sacrificing some allocated time from the subject studies, it is my firm belief that physical education plays a vital role in the future development of the children. After all, a healthy body contributes to maintaining a healthy mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, after all, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36917562724 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90860159844 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0214997528 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.181818182 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269837305757 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986597455504 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765959818148 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167892170022 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641011889158 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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