Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In modern period every aspect of life has been evolving rapidly.There have been advancements in fields like Science, Business,Technology etc.
As a result, so much of information related to the respective fields is generated. Some of it might be sensitive.
This essay is to discuss the views of people about sharing the knowledge openly.
Some people believe free publishing of information is very helpful to society. A scientist's work can be carried forward by others if the details of the project are available.
There are many online open source projects available on the internet. Open source projects are those which provide entire details and source code regarding the software.
This can be used to upgrade the software by performing modifications.Python is an open source project which has been rewritten and improved by millions of people.
While some people believe sharing data is useful, others argue that is quite dangerous to disclose information about any business or scientific research.
If knowledge about a research is released out, it might be used in a bad way. For instance,if information about making nuclear missiles is discoursed,Terrorists might use
it to build those. There is also a chance of spreading fake news and information as the sources of the news will be unreliable.
In conclusion,it is safe to keep some information away from the people which might have negative impacts on people. It is necessary to filter the type information and
make the non confidential information available to the people. It is the responsibility of the government to make an unbiased effort to categorize the data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34351145038 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28218532632 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0492175216 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.38176352705 251% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268307026324 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089781124157 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906650859286 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108801358598 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982177036026 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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