some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research,business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Certain people argue any information available in the field of science,business and academics must be shared. While, others claim that such information has a greater importance and must be kept secret. In this essay, I will be discussing both the views and expressing my personal opinion.
Firstly, people who support sharing information state that this could be benificial in encouraging people towards the fields of science,business and academics. With the availability of bettermedia platforms such information can be easily passed on the entireworld. This can motivate many people to takeup work in the respective field resulting in better innovations and ideas. This argument is also supported by the fact that organisations like NASA have started their own youtube channel. They inform people about space research and also regarding their past and present projects. Other than this, it is a basic right of an individual to know about what’s going on in different aspects of science, commerce and education. Therefore, some people think keeping people informed is important.
Even after considering the opponents claim, I think sharing all available information can have negative impacts. Many information related to research in the field of science and technology cannot be made public because they are of great importance for defence sector in any nation. Also, business after lot of hardwork reach certain stages. If they expose all the methods, their monopoly might face danger. Similarly, students might face tough competition in building their career if everybody knows the best methods of teaching. Thus, it is necessary to keep some information private.
To conclude, In my opinion eventhough, sharing information can motivate people certain information needs to be kept hidden from the world.Because such information is crucial for national security and can increase competativeness in business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...mation available in the field of science,business and academics must be shared. While, ot...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ussing both the views and expressing my personal opinion. Firstly, people who support sharing ...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , business
...ing people towards the fields of science,business and academics. With the availability of...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
... information can have negative impacts. Many information related to research in the ...
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Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: Much information; A good deal of information
... information can have negative impacts. Many information related to research in the field of sci...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
... needs to be kept hidden from the world.Because such information is crucial for nationa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, thus, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58904109589 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03649534776 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602739726027 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5632948856 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283947780332 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936757321289 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735957161072 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183067596913 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0175712001439 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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