Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others
believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In the salad days of the millennium, the society is polarised almost equally, regarding the notion that weather
the knowledge about technological advancement, economy and academic institutions is vital to be shared or not. Different
people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light before making the final note.
To commence with the notion, there are myriad of things to be shared. First and foremost, the scientific
research, particularly in the field of medical sciences, have been so evolved that folks can be provided suitable treatment. As a result, numerous people could be benefited with the advanced tools that can save there precious life.
Secondly, technologies have improvised rapidly. Nowadays, mammoth buildings are constructed at greater pace. Engineers
are building tunnels under the sea and connecting one nation to another that in turn minimizes the time barrier and
makes travel convenient. So masses can devote there imperative time in significant work.
Shifting towards the second school of thought, there are also a plethora of detrimental implications with the sharing of
essential data to another region. For example 2002 serious atomic bomb blast occurred in Mumbai cost for enormous lifes.
Since, the information was provided to help Syria to produce energy from atoms but went wrongly undertaken and misused.
Moreover, economical strategies must not to be provided to unknown because it leads to a dangerous end. To illustrate this a
great event took place that was planned on a digital platform and known as a cryptocurrency. Bitcoins were tried to be traded
for overwhelming capital that rose the market share significantly. Therefore, great amount of monetary funds were kept on
the stake that could be responsible to shrink any country's GDP.
In conclusion, there are many supporters who suggest that sharing of tech gadgets and businesses model can result fruitful
between the relation's of the countries but my argument proves that creating something for oneself and utilizing country made
products is more appropriate to deal this situation
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-18 | Naman Kumar Singh | 89 | view |
- For some people, consumer goods become the most important thing in life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage 11
- The diagram shows how alcohol is distilled through a set of apparatus 65
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 73
- Many children these days have their own mobile phones.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this 56
- The two maps below show the Paradise island in the past and in the present 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ly, regarding the notion that weather the knowledge about technological advanceme...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... vital to be shared or not. Different people have their distinct mindset. The follow...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Research
...d. First and foremost, the scientific research, particularly in the field of medical s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd connecting one nation to another that in turn minimizes the time barrier and ...
^^
Line 15, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in turn minimizes the time barrier and makes travel convenient. So masses can d...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Makes
... turn minimizes the time barrier and makes travel convenient. So masses can devote...
^^^^^
Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Essential
...ntal implications with the sharing of essential data to another region. For example 200...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Great
...a dangerous end. To illustrate this a great event took place that was planned on a ...
^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...ncy. Bitcoins were tried to be traded for overwhelming capital that rose the mark...
^^^
Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...amount of monetary funds were kept on the stake that could be responsible to shri...
^^^
Line 37, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and businesses model can result fruitful between the relations of the countries b...
^^^^
Line 39, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he countries but my argument proves that creating something for oneself and utili...
^^
Line 39, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for oneself and utilizing country made products is more appropriate to deal thi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58536585366 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85144275034 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1943663156 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114687118285 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289008614667 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275980980175 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0297224933769 0.151304729494 20% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302782734304 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.