For some people, consumer goods become the most important thing in life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage
There is no iota of doubt that final products become the most imperative figure in one's lifestyle. In the world of aggressive materialism, where everybody is in the competition of acquiring the best. This phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits like solving a task rapidly and effectively however, sometimes a couple of problems emerge in the same way. The following paragraph casts light on the pros and cons of consumer durable.
To begin with the bright side, customer goods are utilized to complete the given task effectively and quickly. As a result, regular use equipment like a washing machine in myriad households to save significant time and essential energy. Nowadays, life is rampant and in order to match the pace folks make the consumption of instant foods that comes under fast-moving consumer goods. It is not only convenient to use but also has an exotic taste.
In contrast, earlier masses depends upon public transportation system to commute, whereas today automobiles captured the market and individual are so attracted that they use their personal vehicle instead of anything else because of countless comfort and ambiance.
On the flip side of the coin, there are nasty consequences as well. Firstly, with the use of electronic equipment the danger of obesity is evolving because earlier the task was completed physically that maintained superb health. Furthermore, the use of cosmetics (FMCG) has detrimental effects on humans. Consequently, it leads to diseases which in turn leads to medication and people have to pay up to the paramount. Finally, enormous vehicles are moving around the city and they are increasing substantially. Therefore, deleterious gases are exhausted from the fuel the burnt that is depleting the ozone layer and have severe effects on environment
In culmination. I personally believe that merits outnumber the demerits, nevertheless endeavors are made to minimize the latter one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, in contrast, as a result, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 965.302439024 171% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40327868852 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95366711432 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 106.607317073 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652459016393 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 283.868780488 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7556086517 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 5.23603664747 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604539566328 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0165221199867 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266416066362 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0278974316304 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352434678634 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 40.7170731707 241% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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