Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the growing influence of social media and the internet, information sharing nowadays has become more monitored. Providing vital data for different studies across various sectors in society is not only useful but also could have a negative impact. This essay will talk about how sharing information has its own merits and demerits.
Firstly, data is the main source of information that proves to be useful in many studies across various fields. Collecting information from people helps researchers in the fields varying from sciences and academics to media and marketing build a better version of the services that they intend to provide. If there is no free and clear sharing of knowledge and information, many unknown problems and facts could slip out which could harm in the near future. People should share as much information possible in different researches so that the researchers are able to find a better solution to the basic problems in society to a much more effective potential.
On the other hand, sharing crucial information or data could not only harm an individual but it could also be perilous for a nation. Certain categories of data needs to be well protected so that it does not fall into the wrong hands. For instance, if a nation shares vital scientific knowledge in the sector of arms and ammunitions to the common people, it could unknowing be sharing a backdoor into its advanced defence mechanisms to the hands of terrorists or rival nations. Furthermore, talking on an individual level, if we share some of our personal data with the outside world, it could be wrongfully used against us and could also sometimes be dangerous for our personal lives.
In conclusion, I would definitely agree that sharing information to fields of science, academics, and more is crucial for the betterment of the world, but on the other hand some information is extremely valuable to be shared freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08176100629 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73512062883 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.787157889 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276000875551 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106179697514 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783725606519 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189883985682 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741300351881 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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