Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
With the development of technology, it is much easier for information to be shared in different areas. Some people consider that information should be shared as much as possible to support people who devote themselves to research, academic or business fields, whilst others may have the concern of risks including disclosing too much crucial information. In my opinion, the use of information should be restricted in specific fields.
There is no doubt that technology accelerates the exchange between information, which enables people to get more essential statics of what they need in their current research. Since most of the behaviors are data-oriented, it is vital to either enterprises or scientists to get more related information in order to helping them to make decisions. Moreover, by tracking the trends of information, some experts even able to predict human behaviors or weather conditions, which are useful to prevent people from crimes or severe catastrophes.
However, sharing as much information as people can seems beneficial to humankind, it is inevitable that facing the concern of privacy. Since there are more and more information exposed to the public, the line between private and public has become blurred. It may occur serious social problems once the confidential information has leaked to rivals or even other countries due to the negligence in information security. Moreover, there are more companies and scientists ask people to provide excessive personal information during purchasing and conducting a survey. The incidents of leaking credit card information are getting more common in these days. Thus, the government should take the use of information into account, including implementing related restrictions or set up an area of reasonable information usage.
To sum up, sharing information truly can help mankind in various ways; however, it is also vital to setting up standards of restrictions on information in use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, no doubt, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49504950495 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06838411906 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7554829539 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298659454182 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106883017846 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807599189072 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180551868766 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106783083345 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.