Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Music is a way how people express their feelings by the interaction between lyrics and rhythm. Undoubtedly, music is definitely a great common language throughout different ages and cultures. No matter what language the songs are, they can still be sang in different countries, and enable people to share the same emotion inside the songs.
People will have reaction even though there are no lyrics in music or the original lyrics are not written in their language. Take classical music as an example, there are still thousands of symphonies and sonatas that we are familiar with until now. People can soak themselves into the world where the notes have created. Also, there are numerous extraordinary hits that pose great effect on pop culture. World-known bands like Beatles, Bon Jovi and Queen; male singer like Michael Jackson, or female singer like Madonna. These musicians have affected music industry for over decades. Nowadays, thanks to the development of streaming website including YouTube or Spotify, it is much easier for people from different culture background to enjoy the music. Even though the lyrics are not written in their own language, people can still enjoy themselves in music.
Music is a magical key which can across the boundaries between ages. Music can represent people’s feelings without saying out loud. In some hospitals, doctors will play music to elderly as a treatment. Surprisingly, some elderly will react to some songs since the rhythm has been rooted in their mind. Some universally accepted songs are also be wild spread for over years. We may listen to songs that are from our grandparents’ ages.
People may spend their whole lives listening to music. The power of music enables different people to share the same emotion what the songs want to convey. It is music that connect each other, and make people getting closer and closer in this cold world.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 78
- One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this case?What can be done about this problem? 67
- Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways technology affected the types of relationships people make?Has this become a positive or negative development? 73
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ome universally accepted songs are also be wild spread for over years. We may list...
^^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g closer and closer in this cold world.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14102564103 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54970114336 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6790751204 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263299038834 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809822235789 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518833837611 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17289921484 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406473562843 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.