Some people believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
There has been an argument about the educational factors that play a very important role in human development . Sending children to school at early age is being considered by many parents because it has a lot of benefits. However, it is true that there are a number of disadvantages with this.
To begin with, experts say that young children learn things really fast. They are smart and always curious about many things, so it is easier for them to gain the knowledge from teachers when they attend school. For example, thanks to the high level of the modern technology today, teachers have several interesting ways to deliver their lessons to their students. Also, when participating in the educational activities in class, young children would be given a chance to build their social skills by meeting and making new friends of their ages. Another positive aspect to mention is that children who stay at home for a long time cannot learn to follow the school rules such as going to school on time or wearing school uniform.
On the other hand, some people might think that children at the age of three to six are too young to deal with the stress from studying or taking exams at school. They should enjoy their childhood by spending quality time with their parents to have some fun. For instance, when playing a kind of sport, they can improve their physical health. In addition, activities like drawing pictures or solving puzzle games might help to have a better imagination and creativity
To summarize, there are some difficult challenges when students begin their formal education during young ages. Nonetheless, as far as I am concerned, this could bring them more opportunities for their academic knowledge and social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, really, so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9590443686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51507785987 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1049149281 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.769230769 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210097298923 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714303804237 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437101530383 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122015355388 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203390666074 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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