In many parts of the world, the incidence of crimes for young people is increasing. Why is this case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
It is a common notion that the more developed a country becomes, the more criminal cases it has to cope with, specifically those caused by young people. There are a number of reason leading to this and thus some solutions should be proposed to tackle this problem.
To begin with, the root cause of young criminals is highly likely associated with the modern family structure where there is poor family bonding. Perhaps due to the high living standard, parents have to work extra hours thus spending less time supervising or expressing sympathetic towards their children. As a result, the young minds suffer from degradation in mental health, which can be seen in abusive homes or single-parent households. Such adults seem to lack of parenting skills. Another cause should be taken into account is the growing popularity of violent trends on social media or in video games. Many online games, in fact, include the act of carrying guns or weapons to shoot and fight against enemies. This casts a huge impact on the premature brains of young children as they tend to imitate their surrounding incidents and might commit crimes in real life.
Therefore, several measures should be implemented to prevent this serious issue. First, participating in community service allows young criminals to compensate damage for the society to some extent. This approach would force them to be more aware of their illegal behaviors which leaves not only them but also many other people suffering from consequences, in some cases fatal incidents. In addition, they rather be sent to stay in a juvenile detention facility in an attempt to reshape their perceptions. At there, extra lessons about social skills and behavioral management will be given as either a remedy or a punishment. When receiving intense treatment and counselling, the juveniles have a chance to redeem their mistakes and avoid repeating offending in the future.
In conclusion, once the reasons for increasing crimes among young people, suitable solutions are suggested to address this problem. In my opinion, measures relating to self-awareness are potential in preventing this incidence to occur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23342939481 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73311605034 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648414985591 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0129731488 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.823529412 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4117647059 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246748214702 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676654730299 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04852923296 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145514779094 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00600957041716 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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