Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, other believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion and examples.
For the most part, money is playing a fundamental role in our life. some of us think that they will become more happy with better finance; while others believe they are still delighted without massive financial support. From my perspective, each of the opinions has its own perks, but i tend to gravitate on the first idea.
All of us are pursueing our career in order not to be worry about living conditions. we always consider money an indispensable way to get things. Earning money enables people to buy furniture, food, drinks, and many other tools. I am for instance studying at high school and working as a personal trainer at the same time. Although my parents can provide me with financial support, but i still work to live a better life. In addition, there are almost nothing which is given for free, and we need money to trade for it. You definitely can not get off the road without any money in your pocket. some people are enthusiastic about making profit, according to them, nothing is enough.
However, everything has its downsides, so does this opinion. As i has mentioned above, nothing is enough. Someone who is crazy about it can possibly do harm to others. Businessmen are willing to play dirty with their opponents so as to get rid of them. The more people want money, the more bad things they will do. this is not the solution to happiness.
In conclusion, money is a vital factor, but it is not everything. we need to have money, but there are also many other ways to achieve happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62081784387 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49805828327 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613382899628 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4907128081 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4210526316 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1578947368 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340138306016 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840323311141 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482043751126 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189281420821 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141112581699 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.