Some people believe that movies should be based on social stigma while other believe that Based on real life heroes?discuss both side
With the ride in moderation a man has transformed his life tremendously.he has progressd from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on the moon .nevertheless ,there are some issues which remain revocable ,and complex for instance this topic asserts that should movies are based on; social stigma,real life heroes.i shall explore my dimensions of this topic through this essay with example.
To begin with , that social stigma has play main role in all person life about; attitude,behaiver.however it creates many type of financial problem due to physical disabilities develop.for example the ped man film of r k bulking as inspired story of arunachalam muruganantham who invented low cost of napkin in India through it not talk ,and discuss with any one this film raises important question and makes a people to sit-up ,and such a notice of relevant film to is time it force the mass to discuss an an issue which most people's are scared of menstrating.
As for as,that of Based on real life heroes they also play important role in human life. For example bangle movies based on it .beside that girls have not less power than boys in any ;stream,activities.however it realty movies totally real life based upon furthermore they have Bee realized by amir Khan as of actor in summary that with my point of view through upon points that real life heroes ,social,heavenly introduce in every person life about their character,life style ,changes the point of thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, as for, for example, for instance, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99190283401 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23944445704 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.026732039 49.4020404114 350% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 308.25 106.682146367 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.75 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244562131075 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152282276719 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431487573188 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152631965925 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592094514053 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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