When a country develop its technology, traditional skills and way of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive do you agree, disagree
Technological advancement is a biggest step as a improvements. Nevertheless, In this essay through that should develop traditional skills, technological skills; those are positive effects or not through this topic . I completely disagree to this statement. In shall explore my point of view into the following paragraphs.
Following this, that technological advancement have great impact on everyone. Because through it people getting more benefits from it. Therefore technological have been great role in world. Although, when technological advancement like steps not puts in world then how nation more progress as well as, these are many dangerous problems created in county because without technological advancement not any invention, discovery takes place.
On flip side, that traditional have most important role in every life. Because everyone follow own traditional, rituals, culture for incline status therefore when this eradication then progressed not possible in nation nextly, everyone like own traditional, culture because they not comfortable in another traditional,culture. Moreover, when this not properly develop in nation then people not known the importance of country.furthermore, through it people respect traditional, culture when this not available in nation afterthat, some types of badly conditions develop in nation
In summary, that there is no single conclusion to this question still, that due to many problems develop in country finally, this is depends upon person to person . subsequently, when people known the importance of technology, and tradition then this problem eradicate from the world .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, well, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89873417722 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30394335101 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 111.486172536 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987900590016 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384853977904 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036214398526 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636205399137 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267284941919 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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