With the rise of the internet revolution in the modern world, we now have an unprecedented amount of information and options. These choices we have are certainly too much for us to handle. Despite the many choices we have, we end up less happy than before. There are 3 points that support my view.
There are more affordable options nowadays than ever due to innovation and good economy. While people are getting richer, the cost of production and operation is getting lower. For example, air transportation is relatively cheap when compared to what it has been 20 years ago. As a result, people can travel to many countries within an affordable budget. However, these options might have several drawbacks, which I will explain later in this essay.
Besides the affordable options we have, there are several tools that provide information to help us make a better decision. Although these tools are very useful when used appropriately, we tend to overuse them. Thus, we sometimes spend more time searching, exploring, and comparing our choice than actually enjoying it. My personal example is when I look for a place for lunch. I spent more than 30 minutes searching for the best option online and just 20 minutes eating.
The main drawback of more affordable options and more information about choices is that it makes us regret the choice we have made. Social media also plays a big role. When you learn that the choice you have made was worst than the others, you feel bad.
As long as we live in the modern world, we will always have too many choices than we actually need. Nevertheless, it is important to learn how to pick one of them and to live with it our regret.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...tion and options. These choices we have are certainly too much for us to handle. De...
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Line 7, column 218, Rule ID: WORST_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worse'?
Suggestion: worse
...learn that the choice you have made was worst than the others, you feel bad. As lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77054794521 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53293885178 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571917808219 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6315249108 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.3157894737 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194006989366 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586426800968 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541388495908 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117777857346 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378367680375 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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