Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely believe that there has been an enormous number of options, which are way too many, created by human to serve a wide range of human’s needs as of late. While this might be true to some extent, I would argue that it is exponentially beneficial for people to have these varieties in life.
Some people advocate limiting choices, especially in some specific fields such as producing TV programs, and justifiably so. The key rationale is that people, regardless of ages, are wasting their time surfing through hundreds of TV channels all day long. Due to the unlimited screen time and an eclectic mix of channels, many people find it hard to get away from the telly just for a short amount of time. These many readily available TV programs have undoubtedly adverse effects people’s state of health as recreational screen time is gradually displacing outdoor activities. Therefore, it seems sensible that people should not be overwhelmed by choices.
However, I firmly believe that choices are made for developing people’s abilities and they should always have the right to choose. First, as for education, it is fundamental that students have many universities in their option. As each university offers different high-ranking majors, atmosphere and accommodation standards, and learning facilities, these students hold their own future possibilities by evaluating and selecting where to improve their strong suits. Second, it is unfair that people are forbidden from certain job opportunities even if they are certified. Particularly, people do not have to become an educator just to carry on their family tradition, regardless their personal interests. Having a job position that fits their abilities best is the optimal approach to deepen their engagement and encourage them to return the community.
In conclusion, while there might be reasons to support the idea of having just enough number of choices in life, I am of the opinion that people are entitled to choose among many to make righteous decisions for themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
It is widely believe that there has been an enormous number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27134146341 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91964151709 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5913783553 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197821714202 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691760193078 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441850685287 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113995773492 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281867042078 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.