Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To which extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometime argued that people these days are being blessed with excessive number of options. However, I believe that we are being restricted in the number of choice we can make more than ever.
To begin with, our choices of career are being made narrower with the advent of automation. A person in the job market now find it harder than ever to get a job, let alone be able to choose according to preference. For instance, a graduate in the accounting major have limited options as to where he is going to work and what to work on as sophisticated machines are taking over a number of positions.
Further more, children also face much fewer choices in terms of recreation than before. With the development of tightly-packed cities, machines and the lack of open space, youngster have fewer activities to choose from. Instead, they can only immerse themselves in video games, television programs and cell phones.
Last but not least, the modern life allows us little time thus fewer options in every activity. The ever confining time offers modern people less time to do anything, we have fewer alternatives to what we may do in our free time as we have to live fast to catch up with the daily grind of the modern life.
In conclusion, the belief that we are now enjoying too many options is false. On the contrary, we are now have to do with fewer choices in all aspects of our daily life, adults and youngsters alike.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to accord'.
Suggestion: to accord
... get a job, let alone be able to choose according to preference. For instance, a graduate...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...s is false. On the contrary, we are now have to do with fewer choices in all aspects...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64960629921 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50950514947 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1665780141 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4166666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150971437339 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525410141645 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599534218387 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871356326121 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059292522904 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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