Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people argue that nowadays individuals have more alternatives than in the past while others believe that people still need more freedom to make decisions. Both approaches present merits and drawbacks, but, considering the daily life, I tend to agree with the first opinion. The purpose of this essay is to discuss the issue and to point out a position.
It is considered by many that people have too many choices and that is a problem. In fact, more than two possibilities can make the process of making decisions a big challenge. Even considering small and daily decisions, such as where or what eat at lunch. For instance, nowadays it is possible to cook a meal, preparing it at home as well as it is possible to order or to eat at restaurant. People often spend more time making this kind of choice than having the food.
However, others support the opinion that people always need options. In fact, when people do not have alternatives, the society have problems. For example, in some countries people can not decide about their private lifes or about the public life, such as the elections or other relevant aspects to a free society.
In conclusion, on the one hand, having alternatives is fundamental to our lifes. Moreover, it reflects a society with freedom, which is eqqually important. On the other hand, a sort of options can be a problem, as making decisions is always a challenge. Considering the discussion above, too many possibilities can make a simple decision a huge problem, taking time of our busy lifes, this is why I agree with the first position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82720588235 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71853807888 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5984820572 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244918679106 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808175838328 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703010022932 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146157666849 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276782019234 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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