Some people believe that people are naturally born leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For ages, whether leadership skills are natural or nurtured has been becoming the subject of intense debate. Some people hold the belief that leaders' skills are innate while it is argued that these skills can develop through training. From my perspective, I completely agree with the latter statement and my reasons will be explained in the paragraphs below.
People who share the former mindset have their arguments. They support the idea that if parents own leadership characteristics, their children will likely share the same individualities when they are born. Therefore, these kids are born to become a leader thanks to the genes that they inherit from their parents. Studies have shown that people who are natural leaders possess traits that ordinary ones do not own.
On the other hand, many people consider leadership a skill that can be learned. The first thing to regard is the environment in which a child is brought up. Numerous leaders are trained to develop leadership skills such as discipline or hardworking, etc when they were a child. Through practice, a kid can be a future leader although they do not possess natural talents as a leader. Moreover, a person is considered a leader based on their reliability to make decisions and the profound knowledge in an area that can only be emerged after years of hard work and experience. Last but not least, working in harmony with other people is also an essential skill for a leader to have their job done effectively. This skill is usually achieved after a long time of working to get empirical experience.
In summary, leadership skills can be both natural and nurtured. Despite having innate traits or not, it is vital of each of us to practice to form and develop these skills further.
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Suggestion:
...s natural talents as a leader. Moreover, a person is considered a leader based on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93581081081 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65523991988 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2838969147 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337068975378 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114084893135 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087445367764 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20154148767 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267501824454 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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