Some people believe that people have the right to university education, and government should make it free no matter what their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is strongly argued that the government should offer free tertiary education to all citizens in the country regardless of their financial conditions. In my opinion, I totally agree with this view.
Higher education should be free for a couple of reasons. One reason is that it may make huge contributions towards improving the living standard of lower classes in society. In other words, it will be easier for impoverished students who cannot afford such exorbitant university expenditure to have chance to get a qualification and apply for a well-paid job which requires a Bachelor’s degree.
Another reason is that such a policy of the higher education system can promote the development of the nation. Firstly, the more opportunities people get to study, the more qualified employees there are in the labour market. In addition, if a country can ensure a huge skilled/high-quality workforce, it will be more attractive to foreign investors/can draw foreign investors closer to them. As a result, the chance of approaching a significant foreign direct investment is foreseeable. For example, Samsung has invested in Vietnam for many years but they still need to bring their high-quality workers from Korea to Vietnam for management positions, which is a disadvantage of Vietnam in the eyes of investors.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that everyone has the right to get chances to pursue higher education without any consideration about their financial difficulties and the government should conduct it by totally subsidizing the tertiary education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22875817781 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9357312931 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166521084572 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606616095139 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614455063524 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115136226518 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572411138571 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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