Some people believe that plastic shopping bags damage the environment and their use should be prohibited. Other people insist that consumers should have the right to choose whether they want to use a plastic bag or not. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Usage plastic bags in exaggerate will appears many risks especially in environment. Many society considering that plastic bags should be forbade, while others oppose this because every single person having role to determine whether choice it or not. I will examine both viewpoints and convey the opinion.
Nowdays, plastic bags being controversy in social life, few of resident declared that the things should be vanished and can't used again. In other words, impacts from this things will be giving negative effect in environmental, because plastic is can't straggling and many society decided to burn it, the consequence of this condition made bad weather. For instance, India have a lot of plastic bags from people shopping with plastics until made some place with highest stack. So, this usage made the area not fresh polution.
On the other hand, most of society convinced that shopper should be determined to choosing use it or vice versa. However, this statement will be appearing anxiety in life because uncertainties from this things. Fundamentally, plastics will be changed the neighbourhood and aggravate the air, therefor application from plastics should be deductible. As illustration, shopping center in Australia was alleviated usage of plastics and was wiped out plastics in all stores as the result all of shopper using their plastics at home to bought something.
To conclude, plastics have many disadvantage in development environment and government must making some regulation about this situation. In my opinion, plastics still can to use, but the total of usage don't to much and have some proceeding to future such as cultivate again plastics being something with beneficial.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'appear'
Suggestion: appear
Usage plastic bags in exaggerate will appears many risks especially in environment. M...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... that the things should be vanished and cant used again. In other words, impacts fro...
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Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...sed again. In other words, impacts from this things will be giving negative effect i...
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Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ct in environmental, because plastic is cant straggling and many society decided to ...
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Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (India) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...n made bad weather. For instance, India have a lot of plastic bags from people shopp...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...ing with plastics until made some place with highest stack. So, this usage made the area not...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ice versa. However, this statement will be appearing anxiety in life because uncertainties f...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...iety in life because uncertainties from this things. Fundamentally, plastics will be...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disadvantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many disadvantages'.
Suggestion: many disadvantages
... something. To conclude, plastics have many disadvantage in development environment and governme...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...till can to use, but the total of usage dont to much and have some proceeding to fut...
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Line 4, column 207, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...can to use, but the total of usage dont to much and have some proceeding to future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36329588015 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80314498251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0888579652 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353708685105 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127485182608 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725128696131 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22196310383 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241099001538 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.