Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People hold controversial viewpoints about where the experts should work. While some believe they should find a job where they were trained, I totally support the other side that they have their own right to choose where they start their career.
There is an understandable reason for those who argue professionals should be limited to their jobs in a certain country. They may believe that experts such as doctors and engineers should take responsibility for using their expertise to develop the region where they were educated. They may receive support and money from governments and organisations inside the country, so they have to contribute their knowledge and efforts back to the sponsors. For example, some scholarship programs for abroad students require two years of employment after they finish the education program. Thereby, the donators can earn profits from who they invested in.
However, I strongly concur that the learners have the freedom in securing workplaces. They should have the right to apply for domestic work as well as international occupation to satisfy their own purpose. For instance, in Vietnam, many bachelors and engineers search for a permanent jobs in Western countries, where they believe they can gain their expertise, professional work culture, and higher salaries. As a result, some of them rapidly become high-level workforce when they come back and significantly develop their hometown.
In conclusion, many people may think professional employees should work in the country where they learn, I advocate they can work in anywhere they want for their personal satisfaction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41106719368 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80673603835 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573122529644 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4211687198 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458408940443 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174926603714 0.084324248473 207% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109043882748 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325209695728 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506597412433 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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