Some people believe that punishment is the only purpose of prisons, while others believe that prisons exist for various reasons. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Since the ancient era, prisons generally have the role to punish criminals. Even now more people still believe that it is only functioned as punishment treatment. I partly agree with this assertion, while I also believe as the rest of people that jails could have diverse roles.
Prison are normally used as the treatment that limited criminals activities and put them into small cells. One aim of this treatment is for isolating them from normal and good citizens. Criminals could be judged by the crimes they committed, the judge would sentence them the term of imprisonment which they are deserved. For instance, the term usually could be 2-7days as the punishment for minor offenses to 10 years or even more to death as the punishment for grave crime. Furthermore, the limited freedom in a small cell would decrease criminals' aggression and loneliness usually are the most effective punishment for many people.
On the other hand, prisons are not only the punishment but we could take it as a sort of chance that have given to those criminals who have enough opportunities to become good. For justice, the judge sometimes could sentence a crime for who are not so sinful. For a extreme example, a father who have some starving children and stoled some foods from market. He did committed a crime, it is not a right way but the origin is good because he need feed his children and have no ways but stole. Then the cell could provide a chance to this type of people. In most jails today, while in jails, criminal could have job training and have part-time work to earn money which could guarantee the life after they are released.
In conclusion, the main purpose of prions would be punishment for criminals, but at the same time jails are also designed to consider their future life and give criminals a chance to change their mind.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a crime for who are not so sinful. For a extreme example, a father who have som...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re not so sinful. For a extreme example, a father who have some starving children...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'commit'
Suggestion: commit
...d stoled some foods from market. He did committed a crime, it is not a right way but the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78369905956 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47902334513 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8859660791 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183820015153 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663870683598 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541599757775 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12164587853 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566655710503 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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