Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV and playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that youngsters should concentrate on enjoying books rather than playing or using electronic devices. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
On the one hand, watching programs and playing games have negative impacts on children. The first reason for this is their mental and physical health. Kids tend to sit in front of the television, turn on their favorite programs and spend hours enjoying them. That is a reason for the level of children who have an impact on heart disease and vision problems. Another reason is interaction skills, which are requirements, are limited. It is impossible if they are glued to a screen that occupies all their attention.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I also believe reading books is a good way to improve mental and knowledge. Firstly, it is the nature of children to explore and discover, so expanding their knowledge through reading books is the best way. For instance, during summer vacations, parents can let their kids participate in book clubs and youngsters are encouraged to prepare and tell their peers what they learn from this book. In addition, books stimulate the brain and keep it active which allows it to retain its power and capacity. Reading gives it regular exercise and keeps it healthy and sound, so children need to improve and retain it.
In conclusion, there are many drawbacks to using electronic devices. I still believe that it is more beneficial to read due to both skills and a long memory brain. It is advisable that reading books instead of spending time watching is better for both children and parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97445255474 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57258887963 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0585402038 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1875 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257277244657 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737533605526 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065761455238 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150253769213 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335952467408 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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