Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give you opinion?
According to a section of society, the road to success starts with higher studies. On the contrary, others reckon that after school you should start working straight away. From my point of view, the perfect path that leads you to an outstanding career doesn’t exist, every person must find the one that better suits their goals and talents.
If your dream job requires a degree, then applying to university is probably the next right step. For example, to become a doctor you must major in medicine. Moreover, should you be fascinated with a subject and wanting to expand your knowledge, going to college would be a great opportunity to do so.
However, there are quite common cases where deciding to start higher studies may not be an adequate decision. It is widely typical to feel lost and anxious regarding your future once high school is finished. In this situation, I strongly believe that instead of taking up a degree for the sake of doing so, it’s better to take time to try out a variety of courses or hobbies with the aim of introspection. In addition, since the actual education system is based in theoretical learning, students who learn in a more effective wat through practice, will prefer to gain experience by working, instead of attending lectures.
Thus, in my opinion, you can achieve a magnificent career through both roads. Each individual must first discover what area do they want to work on, to then decide, based on their strengths and type of intelligence, the path where they have more chances of excelling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, of course, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89733840304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58880917544 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680608365019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.373563781 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172708943738 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056403711057 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492716394577 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909878782116 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419320184692 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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