Some people believe that studying at university at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views in the advanta
after graduating from high school, we always have two options: some students want to continue their education at university or college for a better job and somes want to get a job straight after school. While there are benefits to who wants to study at university (college), there are also good reasons why it might be beneficial to who has a job after being a high school student.
First, let’s talk about how the university would become one of the shortest way to have a good job. If you want to have a successful career, you need to have well-qualification, meanwhile, the university is a place which can help you to achieve that. At university, there are many high-quality teachers and good facilities that you will need for your future. Besides, studying in an educational environment can create some relationships that are on good terms with classmates, lecturers, professors may help us in the future. Furthermore, before having an actual job, the university will have a program called “internship”. there, we can practice in a very professional environment. we do not afraid of making mistakes because it is one of the ways we gain experience which helps us not to be too surprised about what we are going to do . Moreover, people having a university degree usually get a higher chance than people who do not.
On the contrary, there are variety reasons why many students choose to take a job right after high school graduation. As I said before,the university is one of the shortest way to have a good job, but it is not the only way leading to a successful career. With some people who have a bravery personality, they can stand on their own without educating at university. Instead of that, they choose to be a “start-up” running their own business. In addition, when working early in young age, we always have more experience than anyone else’s. The more challenges, difficulties we choose to face with, the more mature we are.
In conclusion, it seems clear that both studying at university and going to work after school advantageous in their own ways
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- Some people believe that studying at university at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views in the advanta 67
- Some people believe that studying at university at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views in advantages 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83707865169 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96934093997 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3849330345 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.294117647 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265979529131 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08708661416 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859564602063 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199569882368 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828740287967 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.