Some people believe that success in sports depends on physical ability. Others believe that there are more important factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many different points of views are commonly claimed about athletic achievements; while some individuals suppose that success in sports mostly rests on physical skills, others think that plenty of crucial elements could be efffectively obsered. From my perspectives, every coins has two sides, the physical superiority will be the perfect complement to the technical weakness; and those might be exposed into the following explanation-essayy
It is a known fact that one of the most vital requirements to be successful in sports is to develop some physical abilities. Firstly, strenght is the ability to achieve things that need a lot of physical effort. For a circumstance, Cristiano Ronaldo from Portugal is a living witnesses for this standpoint. Playing the debut professional football match with a skinny appearance, Ronaldo is easily fouled by opponents. Realizing that fatal weakness he has been training insanely to enhance his techniques as well as his physicality. As a result, he is one of the best football players in history. Therefore, physical skills are very essential in becoming outstanding in sports.
In the other edge of thoughts, natural talents also play as an important element that determines outstanding performance in athletic field. Talent is typically thought of as an uncommon inherent ability to achieve goals. Lionel Messi, for instance, is considered as a special phenomenon at the age of nighteen in which football fans always think that time young players are not as good as players who are in prime. In fact, starting point as a genius with superior dribbling skills, it did not take too much time for Messi to make his name in the temple of legends that is reserved only for excellent players now, people have praised him as a “goat” which means greatest of all times. Therefore, physical skills is not the unique key to obtain the milestone in fields that depends on many elements and talent is one of them.
In conclusion, a sports outcome is largely determined by physical abilities, such as strength and stamina. Despite this, I hold the view for what most players need to be outstanding are attempt and effort in training as well as practising intensively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aining as well as practising intensively
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1504178273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93409846847 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587743732591 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1521124121 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.266666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135776808665 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414514179495 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401959883461 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815696172528 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188567792313 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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