some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most people think that educating their toddlers at home is good for the kid's development. Whereas, others believe that sending their children to school is really important. In this essay, the pros of both situations are explained below and concluded by my own opinion in the end.
On the first hand, parents should also be responsible for the education of their kids when compared to teachers in school. The first benefit of teaching kids at home is that it creates a strong bond between the child and their parents. Also, kids will obey their parent's decisions with respect to their necessities. Secondly, the guardians can actually track their pupil's overall growth because they are the ones who are going to teach and connect with them on daily basis. Lastly, If this pattern of teaching is taken into consideration, It will save a huge amount of money which people spend on education fees to various institutes.
On the other hand, education centers are the most important part of any society because it creates a perfect environment for kids to focus and study. Further, kids can socialize and make friends which are as important as studying for their personal development. At the same time, Institutes offer various exhibitions and research facilities through which any sharp student can excel in their favorite part of the syllabus. In the end, schools also offer sports facilities for kids which can help those students to stay fit and can take any particular sport for making their career into it.
To conclude, I would say that learning in schools offers an exceptional quality of teaching as well as other required things. Qualified teachers teaching the pupils make them bright students and prepare them for their higher studies by showcasing their talents to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
... their toddlers at home is good for the kids development. Whereas, others believe th...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... home is good for the kids development. Whereas, others believe that sending their chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, as well as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05050505051 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53259538492 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5350661468 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.142857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212274216777 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818668774659 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500265277172 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145899136017 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747491464613 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.