Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
It's believed that the best for the development of children is teaching them at home while others think that children going to school is better. In my opinion, school is the best place to improve children's knowledge and living skills instead of at home.
First of all, there are many advantages of teaching at school.
Children need to have some friends, who can play with them, study with them or chat with them. I think it's very important .....Another benefit is that pupils are taught about living skills which are essential for them. Teachers are very well versed in it which most parents don't have. In addition, students have many rivals to compete with them, thus they can improve their learning outcomes and perfect themself. The infrastructure of the school is also an important benefit. Pupils enhance easily their creativity and health through toys, slides, and swings.
Teaching children at home also has some conveniences. They will have more time with their parents and siblings, so they become more sympathetic and pious. Homeschooling can create a suitable study environment for children, they can't be affected by bad behavior from their friends. However, there are some drawbacks when juveniles are taught at home. They can imitate bad habits from their parents like drinking alcohol or smoking and they will feel bored because they have no peers. Thus they can get into numerous issues like autism or mental health. Because homeschooling has many problems, I don't think it is good for a child's development.
In conclusion, Although both ways have advantages, I still accede with the notion that children must be sent to schools for education
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09489051095 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53992573926 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2308553856 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1176470588 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.82352941176 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266471793791 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100735972094 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116554418391 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18302830323 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12331075132 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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