some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. do you agree or disagree?

Essay topics:

some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. do you agree or disagree?

Tax is paying significant role in economic development of nation. All people are earned money to fulfill their basic amenities. Many people are opine that they have to keep all that money which is hard earned and do not want give to the authorities. I completely disagree with the statement because tax essential part for government and runs with it.

To begin with, The government need to be do their numerous obligation for the development and betterment of their nation. Such as , administration, defence and infrastructure development are under responsibilities of government. Those funds are used for service provide which more beneficial for citizen and individuals. It helps to improve their lifestyles. To built new facilities like sports centers , education campus, malls, bus stations ,hospitals and many more government needed large sums of money. If government have stable economic systems So , they give some freedom in their policies and it Directly benefits to local business.

However, government still facing plenty of issues like corruption , poverty, unemployment, lack of education and transportation facilities . Although , people choose to not paying tax to government because they did not get sufficient life living amenities. Sometimes the tax paying processes and slabs are very difficult understand so, people avoid the tax paying system.They have to make it easy and merge with some of tax slot with each other and make it simple to operating.

In conclusion, government has only source of income is collecting tax from the citizens. If people disobey the tax rules and forbidden taxpaying it create a huge trouble for government . It our fundamental duty to become a part of country's progress by paying a tax.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, in conclusion, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3503649635 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04091641695 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0212882995 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8125 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272365260209 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859473666885 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898077719755 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177797452309 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103544801933 0.056905535591 182% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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