Although it is thought by some that the good way to commute within a town is by car, other people believe that bicycle is better than other mode of transport. In my opinion, I consider that bicycle is the best option to travel within a city, especially to avoid traffic jam.
On the one hand, people think that travelling by car in metro cities is comfortable. In other words, these days, metro cities are tremendously developed and well controlled system of traffic rules so it is easy to commute by own vehicle in the cities. Furthermore, long distances travel are easily covered by car. For example, to travel from one place to another in a city, four wheeler is quickest way to reach at destination.
On the other hand, it is believed by some people that travelling by bicycle within the cities is best mean to escape heavy traffic jam in some areas of the metro cities and I agree. For instance, developed city areas are experiencing immense traffic congestion, especially, in the morning and evening office rush hours and bicycle is best way to travel to avoid any delays. Along with this, in developed countries, there is separate lane for bicycle riders so it is extremely convenient for them to ride bicycle in the cities. Moreover, cycling is very good exercise to stay physically fit. As an example, in the present time, people live significantly busy life-style and prefer to go for work via bicycles instead of any vehicle to them overall healthy. In addition to this, it is hugely eco-friendly mode of transportation to keep our planet pollution free which is most arduous issue to tackle.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that travelling by bicycle is best way to travel in the cities to avoid congestion, stay healthy and is eco- friendly. Government should encourage people to use bicycle by providing extra measure of safety on roads.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comfortable. In other words, these days, metro cities are tremendously developed ...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...om one place to another in a city, four wheeler is quickest way to reach at destination...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the quickest'.
Suggestion: is the quickest
...lace to another in a city, four wheeler is quickest way to reach at destination. On the...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... immense traffic congestion, especially, in the morning and evening office rush h...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...d evening office rush hours and bicycle is best way to travel to avoid any delays. Alon...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ycle in the cities. Moreover, cycling is very good exercise to stay physically fi...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...n, I believe that travelling by bicycle is best way to travel in the cities to avoid co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83076923077 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68739948209 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0123380496 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349247481607 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117497539131 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116161098926 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22347564861 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758285870053 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.