Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
Education is the movement from darkness to light. some people think that unpaid community should be made mandatory for school students. I largely agree with this statement. I will highlight the points which support the viewpoints in the looming paragraph.
First of all, it should be said that the most prevalent con of this trend is a disturbance in student studies. If learners will engage in this system then it will affect their aptitude in a study. parents are always conscious about the future of their children. Detachment of pupils from the study may be a great loss of parents hard_earned money.
Moreover, free community service is advantageous for various reason. Firstly, students will have a great chance to receive blessings from their elders by helping them. Inculcating attributes to babies is the best thing for their bright future Moreover, this will be a good way of introducing skilled and smart individuals to society. This system has implemented in some nations like China where schools are cleaned by students.
I would like to reiterate that this trend should not be compulsory for students. But, it is the responsibility of teachers to attract the students towards positive work. They should have inner inquisitive to do free service.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to inculcate' or 'inculcate'.
Suggestion: To inculcate; Inculcate
...sings from their elders by helping them Inculcating attributes to babies is the best thing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02912621359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66038905104 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 206.0 20.2975951904 1015% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1036.0 106.682146367 971% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 206.0 20.7667163134 992% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 62.0 7.06120827912 878% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208087598605 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208087598605 0.084324248473 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138786345422 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545224866646 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 105.3 13.0946893788 804% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -129.15 50.2224549098 -257% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 82.5 11.3001002004 730% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.92 8.58950901804 209% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.4 10.1190380762 834% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 10.7795591182 501% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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