Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The curriculum of high schools is expected to include mandatory unpaid social works. I completely agree to the point that this would ensure students be placed in prestigious universities and also let them learn about certain social issues.
Firstly, the tag of voluntary community works during high school in college application makes it stand out. This is because of saturation of the application forms with good academic scores despite filtering through multiple criteria, and that is the reason universities have chosen to admit students with unique achievement like unpaid social activities, be it teaching in kindergarten class or assisting local health workers. Lately, Oxford University, for instance, have welcomed applications from students who volunteered in the 2015 London earthquake’s post-disaster epidemic control programmes.
Secondly, community service also helps them to understand and solve the problems their community face. High school pupils have the maturity and energy to learn about their surroundings and work for it. This is supported by a study conducted by Cambridge, in which they claim that adolescents who are exposed to problems, find solutions faster than any other age group. Hence, students of teenage groups must be indulged with community works by their schools.
To conclude, it is expected of high schools to make students free-lance in community works. Not only will it be beneficial in fetching admission in a top university but also expands the knowledge of the students about their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60169491525 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94509205664 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631355932203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9070536986 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163565486029 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685953286579 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397974378364 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975307997351 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021584713065 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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