What book or film do you think portrays a country’s culture the best? Would you recommend it to a foreign friend who wishes to learn and understand that country? Describe the book or film and explain why you would recommend it. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The book that genuinely captures the real culture of India is India- The Greastest Invention, which was written by the first prime minister of india, Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru. The intricacies of India’s diversity and undistorted facts of indian history make this book more relevant for any foreigner who wants to learn about India.
This book was written over a period of time during when the author actively involved in the struggle for India’s independence from British colonials, so it is unnecessary to reiterate the importance given to freedom struggle in this book. The exact and real history of India that dates back a long before to British invasion has also been documented without any false information, which most other books failed to do so for several reasons. Furthermore, the entire content of this book is validated by prestigious universities all across the world.
Distorting history to twist current political situation has become everyday job several indan politicians in this 21st century, and many books were born out of it. Such books have slowly gained popularity and provide contradicting information regarding Indian history is my first reason to suggest an inquring foreigner to stick to Nehru’s book. And my second reason is the simplest grammar with which the book was written and translated to other languages.This enables the reader to visualise the diversity in indian culture, language, food, and so on while reading it.
To conclude, ‘India-The Greatest Invention’ is the one and only I would recommend to any foreigner who wants to pick the true essence of India. Documentation of facts of the India’s past and the usage of simplest form of language for any reader to easily understand make this more unique than other indian history books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, regarding, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30555555556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93386957167 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2761629724 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.8 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155772732499 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698309461054 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349630988432 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100071844598 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154900154482 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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