Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that media occupies an influential position in this society and one school of thought holds the view that violence displayed on this platform could trigger individuals’ progressive impulse. I concur with this notion on the grounds that visual inputs could affect one’s cognition without intervention of regulations.
For one thing, violence at a moderate degree is deemed emotional outlets of artists, which is groundless but to partially reveal the downsides of society. In this sense, the way by which actors convey the messages to audiences and viewers through films or any form of media could be viewed as a good approach to educate the general public about the consequences of such actions. Most directors usually have the propensity of glorifying justice in their works as eventually, the viciousness is likely to lose. Hence, it instills a sense of law-abiding for individuals so as to not engage in illegal activities.
For another, a section of artistic works tend to exaggerate the stark reality and ability of characters, leading to the emergence of growing violent offenses these days. The targeted audiences of mass media is the majority of youngsters, who are interested in action films or online games. Characters in virtual world or big screens act on the basis of encoded algorithms and scripts, accompanying sound and visual effects which is exceptionally appealing to this group. However, fighting scenes displayed sometimes are indeed detrimental without certain restrictions since it potentially creates illusions to those whose age are ineligible. The ramification is that children, with no interpretations of what they see, could blindly duplicate those actions and gradually change their behavior.
To conclude, notwithstanding the fact that violence in media is an important spice of films, I believe that it should be restricted to a certain level so as to ensure the purity of ethical behavior and protect the youth.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...iewed as a good approach to educate the general public about the consequences of such actions....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... a sense of law-abiding for individuals so as to not engage in illegal activities. F...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...should be restricted to a certain level so as to ensure the purity of ethical behavior a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, as to, for one thing, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37419354839 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01623080732 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9846460209 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806878873312 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248230645127 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293876494584 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481442198318 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317519135538 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...iewed as a good approach to educate the general public about the consequences of such actions....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... a sense of law-abiding for individuals so as to not engage in illegal activities. F...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...should be restricted to a certain level so as to ensure the purity of ethical behavior a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, still, as to, for one thing, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37419354839 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01623080732 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9846460209 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0806878873312 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0248230645127 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293876494584 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481442198318 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317519135538 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.