Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
With growing economy,travelling is shrinking day by day,hence,that enables people to visit more and more country.But few individuals postulate that guest of other countries should accept host countries lifestyle and behaviour.In contrary,there are some who affirm that they should allow with their own personality.In my essay,I will discuss both of glimpse.
To embark,there are few compelling reasons to support this view.Firstly,visitors can archive the infromation about country they visit.To illustrate further,they able to know about their traditions,culture and language which is beneficial for them.Especially,some individuals whose main aim of visit is explore the information about world.Secondly,it is equally helpful to host country because,this way they can advert their country.For instance,visitors give postive feedback to ohers so more visitors like to visit their country and that boost their economy.In addition,for local resident it should be a significant way to earn money,so that,their living standard will increase automatically.
However,there are some who hold another view,mostly guests only like welcoming nature rather than restrication and i agreed with this.If visitors of other country will visit us with their traditions then, people of our country can get a chance to know about them as well as their country.Especially,myriad people go to other countries for business or futher study so that will significantly beneficial for them.
Agglemerating,all the points elaborated above,it can be concluded that host country should be a warm and welcoming for visitors and should avoid their personal benifits.In my opinion,if coutry should allow people as it is with out any condition or restrication so number of visitors will rising and it also create great image of particular country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83834586466 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.8113274404 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.926177483 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 388.25 106.682146367 364% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.5 20.7667163134 320% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.01903807615 777% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28977950028 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192299874325 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401516386953 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192299874325 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401516386953 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.3 13.0946893788 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.43 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.48 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.36 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.0 9.78957915832 337% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.7795591182 306% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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