Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviours. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In contemporary society, the increase in the tourism business is calling to question how inhabitants in a host country as well as tourists should behave. Although many are of an opinion that tourists should obey local norms and cultures, some people believe that the host country should get embrace the customs and behaviours of foreign countries. In this essay, I will discuss both views and argue why the host country ought to welcome cultural differences.
To start with, by following the local beliefs and etiquette, visitors can show respect and understanding forward local people. Indeed, there are more people travelling abroad today who have experienced new cultures confirmed that they feel more socialized when understanding the customs of the country they visit. For instance, travellers who have visited junior schools in Japan were surprised by the way students in this country greet adults. They tend to bow 45 degrees to express respectful attitudes. Even in normal daily life and in a working environment, bowing 45 degrees is the most crucial custom in Japan. Therefore, learning new cultures before travelling to a foreign country will be more likely to help people behave appropriately. As a result, following the local cultures might create new ties of friendship and trust between people.
In contrast, there is a disagreement with the previous view that the host nation should accept cultures and traditions from different countries and I am in the same opinion. The host country will be able to gain more knowledge about various cultures and traditions from other countries if they welcome cultural differences. In recent years, our world has changed and become more innovative. Consequently, enculturation is a significant part of development in most countries.
To conclude, some people concur that travellers should adopt local cultures while others opine that residents in the host country should welcome the way foreigners live. From my point of view, I agree with the idea of accepting tourists' behaviours as they have the right to be respected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in contrast, as a result, as well as, by the way, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28398791541 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81968457725 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9326341261 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6875 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419080049714 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124277796334 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112358554876 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272734538149 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884164188058 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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