Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today,
while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand
human's life.
Ways of understanding human life are becoming increasingly controversial among
certain demographics of society. There are some people who consider that we will
not be able to gain any knowledge from the past for our life in the present day,
whereas others who consider history as a valuable source to analyze a
human’s life. In my opinion, a look into the past will give us an immense amount of
information to help us understand life for even the present times, despite some
people's belief that it can be irrelevant now.
There are many who are of the opinion that learning from the past will not be useful
for our present day which is maybe be due to various reasons. One reason could be
because of their belief that information related to olden times was applicable only for
those times while the present has undergone a lot of changes in various aspects of
life. For example, learning about different wars and about who fought whom in the
past may not help us today where there are no such major wars and the majority of the people live in peace. Therefore, some people believe that it is not useful for
today's life in making ourselves informed about the past.
Despite the above belief, there are many others who consider history as an important
source to understand human life. This can be because of the fact that learning about
previous mistakes and other experiences of the people who lived in the past has
helped us to not only analyze life but also to shape it the best way for the current
period. For instance, knowing about the life of certain scholars and leaders like
Mahatma Gandhi has definitely aided us in understanding and following certain
principles of their lives which are applicable even today, even though they were used
many years ago. Hence, many people believe that learning about the past is a major
way to understand our life, which is also my opinion.
To recapitulate, though there are people who believe that we can't learn anything
from the past to help us in our life today, there are others who consider history as a
valuable source to understand human life. In my opinion, I believe that knowledge
related to the past will definitely provide us with information to help us understand
our life in a better way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1934.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89620253165 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49065035853 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425316455696 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9123954018 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.769230769 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3846153846 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 28.0 4.38176352705 639% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421831610473 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191188971644 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125377447085 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124308752818 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077115864771 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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