Some people believe that we should not study history as it has little or nothing to tell us Do you agree or disagree with this statement
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Ans- : While it is believed by many individuals that studying history is not beneficial, other masses opine that. As a result, there comes a moot point as to whether this is a favorable development. Notwithstanding, in my opinion, I lock hours with the aforesaid statement because people can past mistakes from history as well as gain more knowledge.
On the face of it, in my perception, the primary reason is that person can learn many things from their history. In other words, history always reveals the hidden reality of past events which can give valuable lesson to the learners in the present. For instance, if people read historical literature, they will find numerous of life sermons which will help them to become better version of their life due to they never repeat past errors. Consequently, chronicle helps to learn lesson of dealing with different problems of their life.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that learning history is myriad impact of getting knowledge about any particular literature. This is because people not only gain information about culture, religion and rituals but also new generation can enhance understand about their chronological. To illustrate, most of the aspirants doing their higher education about past events, so historical document always help them. Hence, study on history throw some light on long-run.
In conclusion, I consent to the hilt that learning history had not bettered waste of time owing to it teaches about past mistakes, and people can increase their knowledge from history.
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of young people who decide to do this IELTS AC 84
- Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers and what are some of the possible solutions 61
- Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child s development However others say that things like television and friends have the most important influence on them 73
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73633483782 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3380431889 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153474320794 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060304576991 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429044727246 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987278996197 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555382192361 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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