Some people believe that we should not study history as it has little or nothing to tell us.
Do you agree or disagree?
it is widely assumed that we should not learn things about past as it has few or neutral to tell us.Well in my point of view I disagree with this sentence and the benefits about studying things from history is consulted in essay below.
However people says that we should always focus on future and should delete our futubut I believe that we should always look back and should learn from those activities either them are good or useless. history tells us about the things we missed out to learn.For example our brave warrior like ganga Lal shrestha,who fought for county from crual Rana system . From that thing we learn to respect those personalities.
every country have it's own history and the present and coming generation should knows about those warriors ,inventors , pioneers,who contributed their whole life to make country free from the villains. From past incident each and every individual get to learn different activities. we learn from books teacher but the biggest lesson we learn is from our mistake which we have done in our future.its not history but it is just an example from which we hold the thought that history is one part of our study in life.However nowadays people seems to be active and they are really excited to learn about past things which is one of the great thing .
In conclusion, history plays an important role to tell the future about any activities like the contribution to country ,or about our real heroes past life and I also agree that history had a lot of things to tell rather then little
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74906367041 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38926497183 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.440242702 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.375 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243957396509 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109554179991 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660813021167 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165719449827 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359912428354 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.