it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician.
it is widely assumed that people are born with extra qualities for example,like sports and music only.Although many others believed that any child can be taught to become good musician or sport person. well ,both sentences have it's own importance and from my point of view I supports the statement.
we human are the creature of the God and he had sent us with different talent some knows to dance , paint ,and so on. I totally agree that children have alike knees and fond of activities but without learning the those things we cannot be good at them. Nowadays mainly for the children or student school organizes many curricula activities to make them interested and flexible from that also they can be better at sports and music
Even though if the child has the talent of sports and music but he has not taken any classes or practices then how can he be good on those areas I mean to say that it good that they have some incredible extra thing inside them as well as they should have passion and dedication toward those field.
Moving towards those children who has no gifted qualities but have confidence , will power, they may be become very successful on those part.
In conclusion I convinced that either the qualities or talent are gifted or not but there should be strong confidence in own self, and should have great passion and dedication towards those extra activities and their family should be supportive to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, well, for example, i mean, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39813902822 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.412484357 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.571428571 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.7142857143 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291518673443 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135788711272 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174991561244 0.0667982634062 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163663158614 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134925226596 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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