It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are significant number of talents in the world that you can not deny their hardworking and natural abilities. For some people think there are people born with natural gifted on sports or music. While others believe by hardworking and training effectively, anyone can be an athlete or musician.
It is inevitable that gifted characteristic plays an important role to become a good sportsman or musician. Instantly, a kid born with a good ear can hear the difference between music note and define chord incredibly fast. For some, they have struggled while telling the height of the note and hardly feel the rhythm right. The same with physical subject, several kids were born with strong calve and amazing endurance that suitable to be a marathon athlete in the future. With proper teaching and regular training, both types of these kids will become a star on stage and stadium.
On the other hand, it is not impossible for a child to become a sports player or playing an instrument while they might be lack of natural abilities. Look back at the World Cup 2018, the football star Luka Modric has been promoted the best player the whole league. He was born in a poor family and started his career lately compared to other stars. Being called weak and untalented by the coach, but by hard training and strong contemplation, he has archived the stand where thousands of football player wannabe. Even if the kid doesn't seriously follow the career of a sports star or professional musician, they still have a chance of training and overtaking the lack of abilities that they were born with.
In conclusion, I think with a strong will and persistence, every kid can be a good player on the stage or the field. But kids with gifted will develop their skill faster and more effectively I believed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... not impossible for a child to become a sports player or playing an instrument while t...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ootball player wannabe. Even if the kid doesnt seriously follow the career of a sports...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57599581181 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5480313968 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285094503983 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960860463135 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785612191488 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175134131347 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690639167293 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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