People should follow the customs and traditions when
people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or
disagree
Many believe in the idea that when people start a life in another country, following the local culture and tradition is an essential thing that they should do. Personally, I totally accept with this way of thinking because of many upsides that it brings. In this essay, I will explain more detail about why I find it reasonable.
Firstly, the local feel being respect if a foreigner understands and follow their customs. It can be easily seen in many countries. For example, Vietnam is a country that placed a lot of temples and sacred locations. So the visitor comes here need to know that wearing censorship it a must and also keeping quiet. There have been several cases that the visitor has been banned from the country due to their lack of knowledge in that country cultures, some even worse like being imprisoned.
Secondly, it's easier for you to get along with that civilization if what you are doing is like one of them. Native speakers find that it's very uncomfortable when confronts a foreigner, which lead to they treat them like another kind of race. After socializing with the local, studying or doing business will become more ease.
The last but not least, knowing a culture which means that you are understanding more the country. An easy example can be seen is that if you are a market investigator or analyst, it's very important that you must have well-known information about the tradition of where you are taking businesses. Otherwise, misconception of the custom can lead to a wrong move in managing.
In conclusion, going after practices of a country affect positively to both personal benefits and a group benefits like an enterprise or company in many different ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... knowing a culture which means that you are understanding more the country. An easy example can b...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...nefits like an enterprise or company in many different ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84827586207 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6695446222 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589655172414 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1182353793 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163799030862 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475554105448 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703206564932 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803154052147 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06327969351 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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