The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The two following map demonstrates an island before and after establishment of some visitors provision.
Overall it can be clearly seen that the first empty island with few facilities renovate as the well developed tourist spot amazingly without affecting the natural beauty in second map.
The first island contains beach and plants, trees where the another island hold many establishment as like restaurant,accommodation, pier, vehicletrack , footpath ect The unchanged activities in next island is beach and plants trees . Near restaurant there are many building to make the living facilities for the visitor where they holds the motor track up to the reception as well as restaurant from the pier . The residing places also recollect the footpath facilities in the central of building . In the West part there is the provision of swimming pool.
To summarise, the map summarise the deserted island raised up as the tourist spot to facilitate the visitors without affecting its natural beauty.
- Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. 56
- it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talent, for instance for sport and music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sport person or musician. 56
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. 73
- The two maps show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e first empty island with few facilities renovate as the well developed tourist s...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun establishment seems to be countable; consider using: 'many establishments'.
Suggestion: many establishments
...ts, trees where the another island hold many establishment as like restaurant,accommodation, pier,...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , accommodation
...ld many establishment as like restaurant,accommodation, pier, vehicletrack , footpath ect The ...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...aurant,accommodation, pier, vehicletrack , footpath ect The unchanged activities i...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in next island is beach and plants trees . Near restaurant there are many building...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...g facilities for the visitor where they holds the motor track up to the reception as ...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tion as well as restaurant from the pier . The residing places also recollect the ...
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Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...th facilities in the central of building . In the West part there is the provision...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41025641026 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15512975169 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.632898768 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235825388002 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108589372441 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14501680347 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182230172784 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152223118818 0.0819641961636 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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