Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military. Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people hold the belief that a woman is not right candidate for the armed force jobs, others argue that there should be no gender discrimination while selecting a candidate for these kinds of jobs. However, I agree with the latter view.
At the outset, I can understand why some advocate that women are not suitable for military or police forces. They may argue that women are not physical fit enough to perform all tasks of these jobs since these tasks usually demand staying in a harsh climate, having a physical confrontation and so on. However, I believe it is quite a short sighted argument because many women are equally or even more physically fit than men. With the help of training, gym, and excellent diet, any woman can become as stronger as man.
In my opinion, all women should be given equal opportunities as men to join armed forces. Firstly, it will reduce the problem of gender discrimination in the society, empower women to prove themselves and give them chance to serve their nations. Undoubtedly, it is the moral responsibility of the government to provide equal chance to its citizen to serve the nations and the society. Secondly, women's contribution in armed force, especially in the police force, has become an urgent need as a female police officer can handle a case in a better way if a victim is either a child or a female.
In conclusion, although people are in doubt about the credibility of women to get job in armed forces, I personally believe that they are absolutely appropriate for these jobs and in fact there are some tasks in these jobs, which they can perform in a better way than men.
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- Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with police or the military Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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it is a 6.5 Band essay at…
it is a 6.5 Band essay at least.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... diet, any woman can become as stronger as man. In my opinion, all women shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73170731707 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63678130844 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1820757141 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329290641112 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112223141623 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695648100429 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185286267558 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173563159918 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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