some people belive that studing at university is tge best route to a successful carrer while others belive that it is better to get a job straight after school discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary era, the youth is polarised into two group almost equally regarding the notion that whether after secondary education what they to do?would they studying at college level or choose their job, different people have distinct mindset during these type of dilemma so The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches before making final note.
Firstly, To commence with according to perspective view those students whose wants to start career or find out job instead of doing study.If pupil maintain business of ancestor after schooling, they should establish their home as well as family byself.They can be achieved laurel result and also gain personally and socially knowledge and experience. As a result, They can earn lucrative money and understand the onus in early stage.
Additionally, shifting towards the second school of thought firstly, If youth going to further study they learn lot of skills as compared less qualified students because university and college has a pragmatic path to gain ocean of knowledge at professional level, enhance the personality and competition for work, got job in MNC, shelter from violence, drugs.To clearify with example,If A person want to become teacher, doctor, scientist,nurse etc.They should required higher level qualification.Secondly, They should have opportunity to earn higher wages after post graduation.Thirdly, In the competitive era, since there are hundred of employee behind single vacant, we should need higher education to compete it.
In recapitulate, personally I can acknowledge that everyone has own aspects related to education, But according to my implication education has brought a sea change as well as play a paramount role in our life and we should put their best foot forward for further study.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46402877698 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06909586239 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694244604317 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 205.603112817 49.4020404114 416% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 303.8 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.6 20.7667163134 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.8 7.06120827912 309% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0742133033342 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359909709499 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248493105161 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433115974672 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194879690199 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 13.0946893788 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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