Some people claim that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our life. Others argue that advertisement encourages us to buy things we really do not need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is clear that advertising activities have been on demand for a variety of reasons. Although the persuasive intent of advertisements can encourage customers to buy more items than their real needs, advertising campaigns play a significant role in modern life.
There are a number of reasons why advertisements benefit customer’s shopping needs. First, advertising is a direct way to inform customers of a given product’s quality such as durability which acts as an incentive for customers to consider before purchasing an item. For example, Apple, which is a high reputation brand name in the world, has its own advertisement not only on websites but also on some platforms of social media such as Facebook and Instagram. This means buyers can be more predominant in choosing items, which are updated with essential information such as product transparency,design and specification. Second, thanks to marketing campaigns, customers have a range of choices that contribute to the enhancement of their comforts and standard of living and saving time. For example, with advertisements, customers have more choices to purchase a computer without wandering around supermarkets which is time-consuming and disturbs customers from making decisions.
Another compelling reason to utilize advertisements is that it is one of the most essential parts of modern business, especially companies and labour markets. First, it’s possible for brands to expand their markets which can be not only in local areas but also in the global market. For example, Vietnamese coffee has been ranked second in terms of exportation which is the result of mass advertising campaigns with the attempts to persuade customers from all over the world. Second, the advertising industry requires large-scale employment in many fields such as design and photography, which provides job opportunities for many talented employees in those areas. As a result, the marketing industry immensely contributed to personal income.
In conclusion, advertising new-launched products benefits customers in a variety of ways. Buyers should take advantage of it to enhance our standard of living.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ensely contributed to personal income. In conclusion, advertising new-launched ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58358662614 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23247956838 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7801477362 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.466666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112488182985 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044739121112 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415685002303 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921495383703 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395998266562 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lay a significant role in modern life. There are a number of reasons why advert...
^^^
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , design
...information such as product transparency,design and specification. Second, thanks to ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...turbs customers from making decisions. Another compelling reason to utilize adv...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ensely contributed to personal income. In conclusion, advertising new-launched ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1837.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58358662614 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23247956838 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58358662614 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7801477362 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.466666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112488182985 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044739121112 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415685002303 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921495383703 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395998266562 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.